Online content specific to men’s sexual health topics appears to be written at reading levels far above national recommendations. This gap in published material and understanding could become problematic, especially within the burgeoning realm of men’s health. Across a broad spectrum of medical (Rooney) journals, and within several surgical subspecialties (ophthalmology, otolaryngology, orthopedic surgery, and neurosurgery), evidence of PEMs authored at too high of a reading level for the general patient population have been reported (Table 2)(6-9). Urology is no stranger to this, as demonstrated most recently by Pook et al. evaluating online urologic content published through the British National Health Service; content which was reported to be at advanced reading levels to the general population (4). This is a trend that has been demonstrated within the urology literature for nearly a decade. Colaco et al. reviewed online urologic PEMs almost a decade ago from within the AUA and, more specifically, within academic urology departments, noting the excessive reading level required for understanding (10). Despite past and present reviews over nearly a decade, we continue to find a significant gap in appropriately published urology PEMs.
As online, self-directed health information engagement continues to grow, it is imperative for authors to understand the impact that content readability may have on patient outcomes. Evidence of this increased interest in men’s healthcare and therapeutics continues to be illustrated within the literature. For example, increasing the use of testosterone replacement therapy has been demonstrated time and time again 11-13. W hile these trends may likely be multifactorial, they are most certainly spurred on by growing patient motivation and access to free information. Ensuring that online patient-facing content is accurate and understandable is essential for all patients, regardless of access or resources.
Patients with inadequate financial, social or medical support may become marginalized through poor health literacy. This, compounded by difficulty understanding or often discussing complex and intricate disease processes, can profoundly impact morbidity. These patients face increased risks of hospitalization, poor overall health status, and poor treatment compliance. They can face health care expenses nearly 4-fold that of a knowledgeable and health literate adult peer (5). Understanding that male sexual dysfunction can potentially be a harbinger for more insidious and systemic conditions reinforces how important providing accurate and understandable content online can be for patients (14, 15).
Lastly, while all three sources queried are peer-reviewed and respectable bodies for urologic information, there appeared to be a discrepancy in readability across the board. PEMs fluctuated across 6 grade levels suggesting that content can be variable. Furthermore, when compared to each other, PEMs from the SMSNA and AUA were an average of 4 grade levels apart, enough to be statistically significant (p<0.5). EAU materials were only an average of 2 grade levels discordant from SMSNA (p>0.05). This wide discordance in PEMs online is likely to sow confusion and inconsistency regarding patients' proper understanding of their condition and ultimate therapeutic treatment options.
No singular mitigatory step can be performed to improve all PEM’s. Efforts to condense content for brevity and directness can be extensive requiring revision, piloting and input through multidisciplinary professionals (16). Examples of basic language principles used to create documents with easier readability include but are not limited to the avoidance of jargon, acronyms and abbreviations, organization of content presenting the most important information first and even the avoidance of statistics in favor of descriptive words such as ‘half’, ‘most’ or ‘many’ (17). Additionally, and not evaluated within the scope of this project, is the importance and ease of appearance and navigation of content to the reader especially with regards to the presentation and layout of the information with or without illustrations (both above sources).
In this study, we aimed to assess the readability of PEMs related to men’s sexual health published by premier urological associations. We included all pertinent material within each document and used validated assessment tools published within existing literature to perform this analysis. However, there are several limitations worth mentioning. Bias in locating these resources online could be present as medical professionals have often navigated such sites previously as opposed to patients who may use simpler searching or word-of-mouth navigation to reach. We were unable to assess how often the patients may view these articles and therefore unable to speculate or describe how impactful these PEMs are amongst the target population. Additionally, this study's readability and grade scores do not directly correlate to comprehension. There are several other factors, such as document layout, font size, the inclusion of graphics, and additional grammatical syntax, which can add to or detract from the ability of a layperson to understand a PEM (18).